I like the book called 'THE LONG WALK" because this story might happen for us, its about Isa the main character of this book that how she take care of her sisters and her brothers, she had a hard job to do, because her mother falls ill and her father is away working on the great ocean road and she wants to find them without money and ........
its really cool book and I recommend you to read this book and it also teach us how can we solve our problems.
you did great however you made a few mistakes on writing it. Good job.
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